Many young people spend a lot of time on the Internet without any parental supervision or control. What are some of the problems caused by unrestricted use of the Internet and what can be done to curb these problems?

Internet

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The Internet

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has played an important role in our lives since it was invented in 1983.

However

,

beside

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some advantages, it brings several negative

impact

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especially

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,especially

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to young people who use almost their

time

on it without parental management. In

this

essay, I am going to mention some issues caused by using

Internet

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the Internet

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closely; and

then

suggest some solutions to deal with those

problems

. Spending a lot of

time

without any parental control causes many

problems

. One major issue is

tendency

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a tendency

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for teenagers to play computer games for hours and neglect their studies. If they stay up late, they will have

troubles

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trouble

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getting up

in

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the

next

morning for

schools

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school

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or

universities

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university

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. Another issue is

health

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a health

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problem

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problems

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because of sitting down in front of

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computer

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computer’

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computer

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screens all day. If young people waste so much

time

online and do no

exercises

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exercise

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,

this

can lead to overweight, eye

strains

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strain

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and health

problems

.

In addition

,

cyber crime

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cybercrime

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is more and more increasing. Posting

photo

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photos

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onto

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on

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Facebook, you can lose your privacy or contacting strangers on social networking sites can bring you dozens of

problems

. There are several actions that could be taken to eradicate the

problems

mentioned above.

Firstly

, a simple solution would be to increase outdoor activities. Parents should allocate their

time

to go out with their children. Being

outdoor

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outdoors

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not only

help

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helps

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them leave their computers far away

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but

also

improve their health. A

second

measure would be for governments to boost network security to protect users. In conclusion, frequent use of the Internet may take young people many serious

problems

, but

this

can be tackled by effective parental control.