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Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge . To what extent is this a positive or a negative development ?

#technology #individuals #download #music #books #internet #charge #development
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,
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technology
 human
life
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compared to the past
time
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a
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oflot facilities
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available
 for
public
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 they can easily travel
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any where
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 but, it
also
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effect
 on
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their
 human
life
 they completely depended on
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modern
 machinery. There are myriad of manances of
this
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 will discuss in
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upcoming
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To begin
 with, there are some positive effects of modern
technology
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 several
invenstion
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invention
inventions
 in the world it makes easy
life
.
first
 and foremost, advancement of the communication people has
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 talk with their friends and relatives with the help of
internet
.
Secondly
, in
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ancient
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 people face a lot of difficulties
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traveling
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 but, in
this
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modern
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modern
 era the government make roads and provide public transport facilities for
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.
Moreover
, the
internet
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wonderful invention of the century people have been attached to social media they get any kind of information sitting in any place.
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, a survey conducted by BBC news channel
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showed that recently Pakistan suffer
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 natural disaster each person know about it with the help of the
internet
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,
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in
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 beneficial for humans but
it
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effect
on
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individuals
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lifestyle
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 they mostly spend
of
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the
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time
 on
the
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internet
 application
such
 as
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instagram
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,
facebook
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 and Snapchat
it
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also
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effect
 on human
life
. Another problem,the high-tech
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children
childrens
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 have their own phones and computer they find
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their
there
 school work on the
internet
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provide
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bad
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effect
 on their brain and eyesight.
For instance
, according to the study,60% of students like to read e-books as compared to paperwork. Social media has the largest platform
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information but sometimes it gives fake news
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 act the public should aware of it. To conclude, the advancement of
technology
 have beneficial but the government should
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are
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care
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 about
public
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 because sometimes it
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bad
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a bad
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 impact.
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