As the number of cars increases, more money has to be spent on road systems. Some people think the government should pay for this. Others, however, think that car users should cover the costs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Local Community Mental Health Team Copper Mental Health Team Perth Australia September 20, 2022 RE:
Mr
Jake
Cruz
, 24 years old. Dear Team, I am writing in regard to
Mr
Jake
Cruz
, who has Major Depression accompanied by deliberate self-poisoning. He is for discharge today and he needs your support and management.
Mr
Cruz
presented with troubled sleep and a lack of
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mood.
Although
his mood is decreasing, he is improving and has a low risk of self-injury and no suicidal ideation at present.
Additionally
, he demonstrates a better response to Cognitive Behavior Therapy after one-on-one counselling. Medically,
Mr
Cruz
had the first episode of DSP and Major depression a year ago.
In addition
, he sees a psychologist intermittently. Currently, his second self-poisoning symptoms prompt him for admission. He was been prescribed Mirtazapine 30 mg.
Mr
Cruz
, a permanent resident is living
together with
his mother, he has been depressed,
subsequently
, and his wife divorced him a year ago. He has a history of depression prior to divorce and is unemployed. His mother has traditional superstitions regarding taking medications,
consequently
, his mother was re-educated concerning the importance of Antidepressants.
To conclude
, it would be beneficial if you could monitor and observe
Mr
Cruz
for increased adverse reactions and side effects in regard to Mirtazapine, which is 15mg more potent. Please be advised to avoid prescribing him
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medications as he uses those for his DSP. It is recommended to monitor him in the community for suicidal attempts. Could you remind him to continue his CBT sessions and
also
encourage him to do physical exercise, it is best for him to look for a job.
Finally
, If possible assign him to a Filipino clinician for his needs or utilize an interpreter service as he is not fluent in a foreign language. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me. Yours faithfully, Nurse
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