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These days people get more information about world with the help of media. Advantages and disadvantages of mass media.

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this
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 day and age,
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media
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 gives a large amount of data about the
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 to
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.The following paragraphs take a look at both advantages and disadvantages of the argument. On the one hand, it is clear that the big benefit of the
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media
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 is demonstrating actions that occur in our
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.
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 to say,the
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 provide us with
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 about changes in the
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,which can alter our decisions and even our lifestyles.
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,it can help us to learn something and get vital
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.As an example, research shows that 60 per cent of
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 ,who watch the news said that they learn things that they did not know before.
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,one of the drawbacks of the
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 is needless
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 or even disinformation that can confuse
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.
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,as we mentioned, news can affect us and false data can lead
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 to misunderstand many things.
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,
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 can provide scandals and losing interest in true news.
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,in 2019,
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media
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 said that actor Tom Holland and rapper Nicki Minaj are expected babies.
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,Tom Holland calmed fans by saying that he has never met Nicki Minaj. To conclude,
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 the
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media
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 has its own benefits like providing
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 about what happens over the
world
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,it can show data which can complicate
people
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 whether it is true or not

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