Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to a music concert. Please say – Where and when does the concert start? – What type of music will be played there? – Why do you think your friend will enjoy it?

I hope you are healthy and safe. It was really great to hear from you after

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a long time. Today I am writing

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letter to Invite

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you to

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music

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concert. "MILES RATHRIYA" Traditional

music

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night is held on the 31st of august from 7.00pm to 12.00pm. Its venue is the Lake round hotel in Kurunegala . I purchased two tickets for you and me. I like very much for

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traditional

music

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and songs.I believe you are

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a fan of traditional

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. In ,addition They will arrange DJ

music

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and Panjab dhall

music

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. I suppose you are the right person participate to in

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event. There for, We can enjoy

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night with our

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year's experience. As well as

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will be arranged your dinner in the GULAB JANI Indian restaurant. If you like to join

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event please inform me and

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believe you like to participate your sincerely Gayathri

kmgaya1996

Sep 23, 2022

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

155 words

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Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to a music concert. Please say – Where and when does the concert start? – What type of music will be played there? – Why do you think your friend will enjoy it?

Some people think that the news channels and media nowadays have sensationalised and influenced people’s lives in negative ways. Others disagree and say that it is also positive. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sports or music and others not. Discuss both view and your opinion.

Nowadays, some buildings such as offices and school have open space design instead of seperate rooms. Why is it so? Do you think it is a positive development or negative?

Many people believe that the increasing prevalence of fast food is having a negative impact on public health. What are the causes of this trend, and what measures can be taken to combat it?

In modern times, children are spending less time with their families and more time with their friends. Why has this change occurred? Do you think parents should force their children to spend more time at home?