Education should be accessible to people of all economic backgrounds. All leveld of education, from primary school to tertiary education, should be free. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?

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is one of the factors

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important the most for a live life. The more you study, the more you have knowledge.

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factor is a basic thing which

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in each country should have since they are born.

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, some

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government's still ignore

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their people to attempt so hard to access

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. In my inspective, I agree just studying should be accessible to their citizen to all level

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I will

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paragraph.

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with, the instruction should be accessible to all people in

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, but start from primary

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to senior high

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university

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, they should prepare their expense

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themselves

. Because I think, the level of

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that I mentioned above is the basic knowledge that

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can provide

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to their citizen.

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,

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part have a significant role as well. One of

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is take

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care of their children

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good

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. Government can provide essential to their backbone after children learnt from it

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they can make the decision to choose what should they study in the future base on

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knowledge

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that they got from

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period.

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, parents have a gap time to save

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money for their kids'

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in the future as well.

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, governments' have

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for students as well, it depends on

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the condition

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that they set up. To summarise, all

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of society should get instruction that

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by

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until high

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then

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tertiary duration should

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their parents. The more backbone

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better

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, the more you get efficient people in your country.

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, they are part of new generations to

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develop

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country

in the future.