A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer Write at least 150 words.
Dear Kusum,
I hope you are healthy and safe. It was great to discuss
with
you after Correct pronoun usage
this with
such
a long time. Today I am writing this
letter to discuss your opinion.
Although
, your
Correct pronoun usage
it your
first
timeCorrect your spelling
decided
todecided
go to the campaign for Correct your spelling
decided
to decided
this
summer vacation in Dolukanda
. It is a famous place
for hiking. Thus
you selected this
place
is so beautiful and important to many varieties of birds.
Nevertheless
, Dolukanda
has a good height for hiking. On the other ,hand you should climb over to the end of the mountain to your camping place
. So, It has some risks. In the ,beginning you can suppose this
is easy if you think it's wrong,
Because Remove the comma
apply
Dolukanda
hiking has many dangerous places for climbing. whereas we should use our lifeguard and PPE items. On the other ,hand it has a variety of snakes and poisonous animals. As a consequence, peoples do not like camping in dolukanda
.
Because of reasons, I would like to advise you about these criteria.
you should use a big water bottle , food and campaigning instrument. in ,addition
you must get PPE and life Add an article
the addition
garde
jacket, Correct your spelling
guard
boot
, clothes, hats etc...
In my Fix the agreement mistake
boots
view
Add a comma
,view
Dolukanda
is a
adventure Change the article
an
place
. because I like it very much and i
would like to participate with you but I planned lots of work Change the capitalization
I
to
these days . So, be safe and Change preposition
apply
i
wish you all the very best for your camping.
you're sincerely
GayathriChange the capitalization
I
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.