car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past 30 years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. how to do you think this statement is? what measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars.

The possession of
cars
has increased very fast over the past time period of 30 years that majority of cities in the world are now 'one big
traffic
jam'.As far as my opinion is concerned,I totally agreed with the statement because
traffic
jam is one of the major problems in the world.
To begin
with, the problem is caused by
cars
.
First
,
cars
produce noise pollution because of their engine and because of horns.
Secondly
,air pollution occurred because of their engines when they are heated.
Thirdly
,now everyone has their own car because of
this
there is too much
traffic
in every country of the world.And people who are going to school, colleges, university or jobs they are getting late because of
traffic
jams.
On the other hand
,the solution to
this
problem is that government should apply huge taxes on
cars
and they should rise the prices of
cars
because of
this
not everyone will afford to take
this
only a few people will afford it.
Furthermore
,they should ban huge trucks on small roads and with ,
this
they should make a law in which they ban private
cars
in busy places in busy times.
Although
the government should tell people that use public transport for short visits.Because of these solutions, there will be less
traffic
as compared in past To conclude my essay I must say that, the government should apply these solutions fastly if they apply these things slowly there will be more
cars
on the road as compared to the past.In the end,we have to solve
this
problem before it gets too late
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