You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organizer. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have

Dear Sir or Madam, I am Ishant Kesar, a trainee who will be travelling

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month to London, for Salesforce training. Recently, I came to know that you are looking for someone who can organise a social

event

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, Dreamforce, during

this

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program. I would like to inform you that I am very interested to lead

this

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event

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because I always wanted to organize

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kind of

event

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in the past but could not do it due to lack of opportunity. Apart from

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this

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will help me to improve my communication skills.

Also

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, I would like to know some information about the

event

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so that I can work on it.

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, if any rewards and recognitions are needed for employees,

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I will arrange trophies for winners. Just to give you some background of my past experience, I have participated in many outreach programs where I got the opportunity to teach school children.

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they are incomparable to events like Dreamforce, I gained confidence which is always beneficial. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Ishant Kesar

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