1. After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter: introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing express your appreciation and offer him/ her to visit your home with his/her family

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Dear

Mrs.

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Jones, It is a letter from Kate, who had been injured in an accident

to your house, and whom you were taking care of. Horrible and stressful thought situation was, you showed remarkable skills of the

first

aid and an incredible ability to stay calm. Had it not been you, I would have possibly been dead already. I am writing to express my sincere appreciation for your support and attention during the time we were waiting for

ambulance

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an ambulance

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. I am really happy that you were able to help me,

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stranger, through

this

hard moment of my life disregarding your own affairs and schedule.

Such

compassion and kindness are so rare nowadays. I would like to invite you,

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apply

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Mr.

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Jones

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and both of your amazing children to visit my place. I trust you will enjoy your visit

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my home. Hope to see you in the near future. Gratefully yours, Kate Kulikova

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
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6 paragraphs

156 words

5.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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gratitude
appreciation
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kindness
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sacrifices
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invitation
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personal connection
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impact
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