Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed. What is the reason for this? Is it negative or positive development?

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older educate their

children

. It is argued that the younger generation

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getting more pressure from their

parents

. There could be several reasons why they do

this

, and I believe that these actions can cause detriments to the development of

children

.

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is going to examine the motives behind

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phenomenon and elaborate on my perspective.

Parents

usually leave no stone unturned in the path of pushing their

children

to success. There is a strong correlation between a happy life and a successful person, so they tend to force their

children

to work hard. They would not realize that without

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the help of the older, they are not able to maintain self-discipline.

As a result

, they would not emerge triumphant. In some cases,

parents

deliberately set tight schedules on behalf of their

children

, limiting time for recreational activities, so the latter can focus on achieving high scores. I believe that these activities can cause a negative impact on

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children

’s mental health. The more

parents

for their

children

, the more stressed they are. Without outdoor activities, they cannot relax or expand their circle of friends, which increases stress levels. In the long run,

children

’s mental state can

be deteriorated

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.

This

will render them unable to

to

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study and succeed in the near future.

As a result

, those methods to force

children

prove

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counterproductive. In conclusion, it is understandable that

parents

want their

children

to gain achievements

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they can go to extremes to accomplish their goals.

However

, the approach of putting them poses more threats than positive

impact

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.

Parents

should accompany them by empowering their intellectual curiosity.