Most people are not interested in how their food has been produced. They only care about how much it costs. How true is this statement? What influences people when they buy food?

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, everything cone into very easy include having what you eat.
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have many different choices when they decide to buy
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shop to suit their lifestyle. Some singer
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time so they tend choice
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can help them save time like
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, .. and they do not worry about money.
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likely to think about their finance because they only have a little money.
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have plenty of time and they do not worry about money. They care carefully
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, organic and fresh. Having
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meal
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and healthy
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important
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them. Another
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to buy
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where you live. If you
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in my country, you always had fresh
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and healthy. Because it is my country is placed on
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so the is not issue important. In
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that cost is only one
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choice
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look at
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before
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quality
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