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Describe a meal that you enjoyed eating in a restaurant?

#restaurant
Well, I am going to talk about a meal that I enjoyed eating in a
restaurant
. In the meantime, I live in an apartment under proof with my
friend
. So we can not afford to eat in a
restaurant
 very frequently.
However
, there
is
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 some occasions when I prefer to meet my
friend
 at a
restaurant
 and I like the delicious menus the
restaurant
 offers. One
such
restaurant
 is "
Pizza
 4'P" that I really like. I went to
this
 a couple of weeks ago with my
friend
 on my birthday. The
restaurant
 is located in a large shopping mall in the city. It is almost about 20 minutes drive from my house. The
restaurant
 is on the 5th floor and offers a nice open sky view. My
friend
 agreed
also
 that the way the
restaurant
 offers is excellent. We ate the beef
pizza
, some noodles,
also
 salad and drank juice. I remember that I ate around 2 pieces of
pizza
, and my
friend
 ate far less
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that than
. The
restaurant
 offers an excellent view as well as nice decoration. Especially,
pizza
 is very delicious and the price is reasonable. In my opinion, it was a place to enjoy our dinner.
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