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or admiring

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their tasks or targets, brought up a discussion.

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, part of people assume that it seems

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damage

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, but it has

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in some rare

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paragraphs.

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and foremost, the main reason that has been proved by scientists is the time when the brain got a reward and received some encouragement,

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persist to remove obstacles.

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,

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reason encompasses harmful effects on

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status, they may throw away their target and after repeating

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algorithm, a new habit is formed in their routines and leads to

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keep far away from their achievements.

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system

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them for short- term issues they learn

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habit and they will put it

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their life.

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considered rare circumstantial like

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and overwhelming

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children

need

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step by step

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sensitive direction. In

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, they need

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supports to provoke them for continuing their ways. To illustrate, when students have problems in math and physics,

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them creates a window of opportunity

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enhancement. To conclude, there is a controversial issue that

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refused by some people. As mentioned, I assume that not only

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this

method culminates in losing their enthusiasm, but

also

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will be made. As a

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be feasible.