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You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future

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Dear Sir/ Madam, I would like to thank you for your great
suppor
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support
 in hosting a corporate meeting for our organization at your
hotel
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 'The Grand'
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 week.
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Hotel
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The hotel
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 has enjoyed
great
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a great
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 reputation throughout the years by winning
best
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the best
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hotel
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 award
of
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in
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 the city, because of its great service.
This
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 time with our experience no
expection
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expectation
 it was
over all
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overall
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 good but expect
food
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. I must mention that we liked pretty much everything about the
hotel
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, including its hygiene and
cleaniness
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cleanliness
, great customer
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service
serivice
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service
, large lounge area and high internet speed. We
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 liked the fact
confrience
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conference
 hall of your
hotel
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, where we organized an all-day-long meeting without any trouble, was very spacious and comfortable all kinds of
modren
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modern
 facilities and amenities.
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, when it came to the
food
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 that we were served, I am afraid I cannot say
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the
teh
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the
 same, and some of our participants complained about it. Some of your items
where
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 not properly cooked. In fact, I felt like the
food
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 was cooked
my
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 amateur chef.
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, the
breads
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bread
pieces of bread
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 which were
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served
sereved
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served
was
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were
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 dry and tasted like it
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 heated in
microwave
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the microwave
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. Anyway, without getting into
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 details, I would like to ask you to tell your chefs to be a bit more careful about the
food
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 they serve to your
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valuable
valueable
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valuable
 customers. Rather than cooking
food
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 in
advance
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 they can cook fresh
food
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. I am hoping that the
food
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 quality will improve in future. Wishing you a great day. Yours faithfully, Roger Rodriguez
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Compliments
  • Ambiance
  • Professionalism
  • Hospitality
  • Quality
  • Variety
  • Freshness
  • Catering
  • Menu options
  • Dietary requirements
  • Feedback
  • Survey
  • Collaboration
  • Improvements
  • Rectify
  • Gastronomy
  • Culinary
  • Hospitality industry
  • Client satisfaction
  • Constructive criticism
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