People in many countries are spending less time with their family. What are the reasons, and effects of this?
Nowadays ,in some countries ,the
time
with family is less taken. There are various reasons that causes
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cause
to
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this
problem.
The first
compelling reason why people spend less time
with their family is that in recent years, thanks to the development of economics, many individuals have to take their time
to rush their work
and earn money for their living income. For instance
, in Vietnam, many students who live far from home have to study and work
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time
. In addition
, some of them have to work
during their holidays to have more money so that
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time
to visit their father and mother. The second
reason is that nowadays, people who get married tend to live far from their parents
and start their own life. Because of taking most of the
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time
with their work
, feeding their child and family
problems, they do not care too much about their Add a missing verb
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parents
.
There are various effects if this
situation just continue
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worse. Long Correct subject-verb agreement
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no meeting and no interaction, most people will change their mind
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minds
For example
, there are many situations that the parents
lost their child
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child's
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with no footsteps in many countries.
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related
this
problem. In addition
, this
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
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