Some people consider price as most important thing to consider when buying a product or service. Do you agree or disagree ?
In today's world before purchasing an item or availing of its service individuals think about its economic values. I am in total favour of
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a very uncertain future in the coming days.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite