Some people consider price as most important thing to consider when buying a product or service. Do you agree or disagree ?

In today's world before purchasing an item or availing of its service individuals think about its economic values. I am in total favour of
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a very uncertain future in the coming days.
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argument can be made that value is always best if you have the best deal out of it. To start with buying an item will always
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challenging factor with so many things to consider
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their quality, legibility and so on. In other ,words a person's financial situation plays an important factor before purchasing as well. For ,example
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who consider buying a mobile device there are companies like Apple , and Samsung who has high-end and affordable products
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, individuals need to understand what he is looking
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the best value for money . Another thing is the variable factor which has happened just recently the coronavirus disease. The pandemic has halted the whole world with so many businesses closed down which
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so many
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losing their jobs. So
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do not spend so much money
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before, because they want to save up
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uncertain economical situations.
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when they need to buy they always check the price
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in order to avail
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service.
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in US sneaker market is
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on
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of the most booming markets in recent times with individuals buying, and selling it was considered the most fast-growing industry
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market crashed with
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just wanting to save up and not
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spend too much on items that ended up losing to the whole industry. In
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the world we are living in has changed with so many factors that led to
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just buying products or avail
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service because they need to. The financials and the uncertain facts
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changes.
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