In a number of countries, some people think it’s necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.

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true that citizens have different views about spending money

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a

country

. Others think that it’s essential to invest significant amounts of financial support for building new railroads for trains between cities.

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other people hold the notion government

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to promote the system improvement of existing public transport. On the one

hand

, building new railroads bring along not only benefits but

also

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. As for the benefits, there

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2 factors worth

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including

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, time-saving and less traffic.

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more new railway lines we would come to more local in our

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and don’t need to use

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money for

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address you want because we maybe will have a road that leads directly to that place.

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we won’t need

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, there will

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many trains for us to choose

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but not least, we would sure save

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time and can go home

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in

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correct

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time because of

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had

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many railroads so the traffic jams will

be solve

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. Regarding the drawback,

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may need

re-planning

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street system for building train stations and

place

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to put train tracks.

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up space to build, citizens

also

have to spend a lot of for

this

new construction.

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hand

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existing public transport vehicles offers different pros and cons. When it comes to the advantages, dill (thì là) people still keep they are old transport and

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less economical than we

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build

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one. But

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disadvantages

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of

this

is if we do like

this

we just improve and reuse ( sử dụng) the old ones, we

are not update

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a modern transports

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for

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so that the

country

will not keep up (

theo

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the

kịp) with the globalization of the world. A relevant illustration of

this

would be that in the world we are using

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for

transports

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now but in your

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still use cars,

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and

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trains that

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too much fuel it’s really not good. Personality,

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agree with another option that both measures should go

hand

in

hand

. All in

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transition is very crucial for a

country

because

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will promote travel increase and help

economy

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develop. But if we only focus on the new aspects, we are overlooking the fundamental

basic

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of a

country

. What actually matters is that the government private

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and

individual

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should have

positive

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attitude to ward different promising innovation methods and willing to start the projects if they are equivalent.