Some feel governments, rather than private companies, should be in charge of medical services. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are debates about whether
health
services
should be provided by
governments
or private sectors. In my
opinion
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getting a
health
service is a basic human right, so I strongly support the idea that public
health
service
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should be available for everyone. In
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will discuss both ideas to make a conclusion. Nowadays capitalistic system let private companies stand a big role in every industry,
therefore
one of the main
industry
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is
medical
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sector. Of
course
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it creates
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competition,
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quicker development,
better
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services
. Public hospitals are mostly too crowded and busy and often can not offer instant service.
For example
, in
Mongolia
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have to reserve a
doctor
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appointment at least one month
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prior and sometimes it can cause
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fraud in
this
situation.
However
the essential feature of capitalism is the motive to make
profit
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,
hence
we should carefully consider whether our people`s
health
should be
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on profit. Administrations of every country
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responsible for their people`s safety,
health
and
well being
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.
Governments
run their own medical systems, people will have equal opportunities to receive medical
services
regardless of their financial status. To be more specific, there are some cases,
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after private companies took over medical
services
from
governments
, the price for
services
such
as general checkups and surgeries
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increased significantly.
Consequently
, it has become burdensome for people to go to the hospital because of its cost. In conclusion, medical
services
are far better to be run by
governments
for several reasons.
Governments
can offer equal chances for people to get medical
services
without discrimination of both wealth and region.
In addition
to that, private insurance will be an option not compulsory in order to receive medical
services
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fundamental human right
  • equitable access
  • government-run healthcare
  • economies of scale
  • negotiate
  • healthcare costs
  • profit motives
  • compromised healthcare
  • health inequities
  • accountable
  • public health objectives
  • reinvest
  • infrastructure
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