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Tourism is one of the fastest growing industries and contributes a great deal to economies around the world. However, the damage tourism can cause to local cultures and the environment is often ignored. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is certainly true that
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tourism generates huge sums of money and for many countries in the world it is
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the main resource for the government budget. The local economies all around the world are very dependent on the influx of
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 every
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, particularly with
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 to local employment. Countries like Cuba
for example
 have a significant number of people employed in the hotel industry
as a result
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 not to the local economy but to the multinational companies that supply transport to the visitors to get to their destinations, hotel chains and to the shopping outlets that offer hospitality to them.
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, critics say that the ecological situation in the world is getting worse and worse, and, of course, partly it happens because the number of international flights has skyrocketed
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 those of 50 years ago. There has been
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 by environmentalists that the amount of pollution emitted by aeroplanes
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 tripled.
In addition
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 are becoming more and more capricious, they are not just satisfied with ancient
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architecture
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, they want something exclusive, like unique places of vital eco-system, especially those fragile areas of Antarctica.
Although
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 some folks prefer to ignore the negative impact on
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nature, nowadays we face
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 different reality. The nature surrounding and dwellers who live near the airports experience on themselves the effects of noise and air pollution.
On the other hand
, the tourists generate tons of waste, which has a deep impact on the local urban image. In many cases, they are just ignorant and don’t respect the rule of the place they visit.
For instance
, some persons who live close to the beach leave some waste food and plastic bottles in the sand and don’t even worry about recollecting them afterwards.
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, I think it is wrong to claim that those problems are being totally ignored. There are many eco-friendly organizations which are seriously concerned about the modern situation, and they do their best to make people aware of the impact they do on
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nature, by setting
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 forums and meetings. As the market tends to determine how things develop, we can only hope that the demand for the form of responsible tourism
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 to grow.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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