You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter say how you feel about his petformance give details of your musical activities explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

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Dear Amir, I am writing

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letter to tell you my impression of the fascinating performance you gave at yesterday’s festival.

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, I am a big fan of yours and

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I follow you on all your accounts on social media platforms.

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I do not feel comfortable in noisy crowded places, when I saw your name on the festival’s list, I did not hesitate about booking the ticket immediately. During the

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I was amazed by your performance and your diverse tones.

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, I believe

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amazing to play the guitar while singing. After listening to you, I felt relaxed as you left a soothing effect on my heart and soul.

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, I see you as my role model so I started to play the guitar two months ago and I have the intention to make a band with some of my talented friends, but I do not know how to lead

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band and whether our acting is appropriate enough to make

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band or not.

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, I would like you to see the CD which I send with

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letter and tell me about your opinion and how we can enhance our talents. I look forward to hearing beneficial advice from you. Yours sincerely,

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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6 paragraphs

208 words

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stellar performance
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musical prowess
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mentorship
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