You have recently visited a local school in your community. It needs people who can help renovate the building and also help with some activities. Write a letter to the principal of the school and say – How would you be able to help? – When and why would you do it? – Who will help you to do it?

Dear Sir, My name is Harwinder Kaur and my younger brother is studying in your school.
Last
week, my friend and I visited the school where I saw an advertisement that management is looking for people who can help them in building renovation and for other activities
also
. Since I am on our college break for 15 days, I would like to help. Actually, I have some experience of painting so I will paint the walls of classrooms.
Besides
, for kids, I will draw some drawings that will help them to remember the shapes and colour names.
In addition
, I will
also
note down some tables so that while playing they will remember
this
. I am excited to start my job
this
weekend because before that I will finish my college endeavour. By doing
this
job I will spend my vacant time being productive.
Further
, I enjoy painting
however
because of study I Ieft
this
hobby and now, I have an opportunity and I could not miss my chance.
Although
I have limited time, my friend will help me with
this
task.
Moreover
, he has incredible knowledge about the quality of colours and I could use his assistance in
this
significant task. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Harwinder
Submitted by Harinder on

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