In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. Why might be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
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is
rent
their homes than buying them. Nowadays, humans are choose
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chosen
on
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rent
. This
essay will both sides either a positive and
a negative situation.
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or
First
and foremost, There are many positive situations. The best explanation is that the value is appericiated
by us. Correct your spelling
appreciated
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live global world and life is very expensive so Unnecessary verb
apply
that
humans must limit spending where Correct word choice
apply
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electricity
electircity
, gas, internet, Correct your spelling
electricity
house
bill because we have to some expenditures. In Correct word choice
and house
other
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out another county or city, doesn't problem the Change the verb form
are carrying
house
if we are
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apply
rent
a Change the form of the verb
renting
house
because we don't have to deal with the house
. In additions
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money
, he isn't choose
to Change the verb form
doesn't choose
purchase
where the
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a
house
due to give
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giving
money
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the bank
give
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gives
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a
money
we can establish the
small company.
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a
On the contrary
, the people opposing that rent
a house
. The justification is that on occasions where we need the guarantee on the house
. One can postulate, ıf
we have enough Correct your spelling
if
money
to purchase
, we cannot buy a house
. This
is a problem old
age because they have to feel Change preposition
in old
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a guarantee
guarantee
in their life. In Wrong verb form
guaranteed
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person
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a person
the person
house
instead
of rent
, no one can get her out of the house
. Especially, old age want
to buy a Change the verb form
wants
house
moreover
becoming steadly
sophisticated for Correct your spelling
steadily
rent
a homes
even though has got the Correct the article-noun agreement
a home
homes
money
is not buying. However
, we have a house
whenever want to go Correct your spelling
another
any other
anoother
place and it is lucky for me but I think so ıf I have enough Correct your spelling
another
money
to purchase
a house
, I will choose not
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tonot
purchase
just that choose rent
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to rent
house
because given the bank of the much more which is logical.
Whenever we think of buy
or Wrong verb form
buying
rent
a Wrong verb form
renting
house
, a mixed feeling surrounds and leaves us wondering how the future will be. One can conclude,
if we have a Remove the comma
apply
lot
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money
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because we need to have the money
now. Everyone is hold
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the
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apply
money
on
their hand Change preposition
in
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because
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because
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is
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be careful
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money
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