Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.

A number of individuals consider the most concerning trouble is the extinction of endangered

animals

and plants, while others disagree and there are a lot of environmental issues that we should concern about more. Since the industrial revolution began, humans was focused more on their materialistic growth rather than on

nature

.

As a result

of

this

, habitat loss was exacerbated severely. Now we will discuss why certain species of vegetation and

animals

are becoming extinct or other changes of

nature

are essential to give attention to. The main factor of environmental degradation is probably human activities which exhaust our natural resources

such

as mining, farming, and industrialization. These operations lead to habitat losses, which are soil depreciation and infertility lands, and

then

these side effects are followed by

extinction

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the extinction

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of

animals

and vegetation.

Therefore

, we should be aware of the root issues and causes of these problems. To add,

loss

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of specific species is a sign of how much our

nature

changed gravely. Because increasing endangered species means that there is no longer a suitable environment

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that

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animals

and plants thrive.

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, rain is becoming more and more acidic compared to its component four decades ago due to the fact that industrial wastes are

releasing

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into the atmosphere. It results in creating acidic soil that plants can not grow naturally. In conclusion, lots of people agree that heavy factories and urbanized lifestyles cause

the

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serious side effects on

environment

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the environment

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.

Animals

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and plants’ existence is questioned because of the

habitats’

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habitats

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losses

that

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issued

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by

humans

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activities.

Thus

, we should more concentrate on the origin of the reason for these disasters of

nature

.