It is now possible to order almost any item over the internet and have it delivered to one's home. As a result people are no longer patient or careful in their shopping habits. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is no question that we are in a consumerism society

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nowadays

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nowadays

. People

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become impatient and incautious because of the convenience of online shopping; anything can be purchased and delivered without anyone

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out

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a house.

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essays agree with the aforementioned statement and will provide several reasons before the conclusion is reached.

First

and foremost, people tend to pay less attention when they shop on a website. Because of the fact that an order could be placed in less than 5 minutes,

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of shoppers spend

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short

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if they really need it. Compared to visiting

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stores, people spend more

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a purchase.

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, they have more

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to justify their shopping.

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, globalisation allows individuals to have

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the product

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shipped overseas, so they are exposed to

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of items of the same

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. It is very easy to be carried away by the improvement of marketing starting from being

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to having clever design.

For example

, pens can be purchased anywhere,

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, when it turns to

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online for it, a lot of

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Japanese pen

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or limited edition pen pop up instantly. It is undoubtedly more impulse to buy

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to boring mass

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widely found. To sum up,

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agree

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that consumers

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less patience and do not feel the need to be aware of how they shop because of less

time

to consider and attractive options are found with only a fingertip.