You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. write a letter to your manager. in your letter -why you want to work in company's head office for six months -say how your work could be done while you are away -ask for his/her help in arranging it.

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Dear Javid I am writing to express my interest in working at the head office of the company for six months.
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,I would like to explain the reason behind my request is that I have enrolled course in the capital of Britain.
This
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is practical training in the field of electrical engineering.It will be lasting for half a year.
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,according I know,Microsoft has the main branch in London and
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in order not to quit the job.I want to be transferred there. I would like to suggest that Sarah is an eligible person to substitute me for a short period.I will teach everything her before going.
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,every chance I get I will endeavour to keep in touch with her while I am in foreign. I hope you do not have any disagreement with regard to asking for altering my workplace.I believe that
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experience will be beneficial for not only me but
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for business.
Further
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to
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,I am short of time
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why please contact me as convenience as. I look forward to hearing from you soon Yours faithfully Malik Maliki
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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