You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter: Explain why you want to do the voluntary work. State what your skills and experience are. Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir / Madam You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

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Dear Sir, I am writing to you to express interest in the voluntary work advertised on your website. I would like to work in any country in Africa for two months. I graduated from ABC University in 2022 with a bachelor's degree in linguistics.

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students in an Australian

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. I am willing to dedicate my two-month vacation to providing any support in a developing country. After watching a documentary about one of the African countries, I have been inclined to support people in

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countries and give children educational opportunities. I will bring enthusiasm to teach English or Japanese at a public

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in order to make them enjoy going to

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they could build a bright future. I believe that I will be responsible for the program. I look forward to hearing from you. Thank you for your time and consideration. Yours faithfully, (MY NAME)

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

162 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

voluntary work
unpaid work
developing country
positive impact
global community
cultural exchange
expand horizons
experienced
skilled in
passionate about
cause
healthcare
education
environmental conservation
project management
soft skills
communication
teamwork
adaptability
geographical region
short-term project
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