Do the dangers derived from the use of chemicals in food production and preservation outweight the advantages?

Most foods that are purchased these days in small stores and supermarkets have vinegar in them
that is
used to improve production and ensure the
food
lasts for longer.
However
,there are concerns that these have harmful effects.In my opinion,the potential dangers of
this
are greater than the benefits we receive. There are several reasons why vinegar is placed in
food
.
Firstly
,it is to improve the product to the eye,and
this
is achieved via the use of colourings which encourage people to purchase
food
that may
otherwise
not look tempting to eat.Another reason is to preserve the feed.Much of the meals we eat would not actually
last
that long if it were not for the chemicals they contain,so again
this
is an advantage to the companies that sell cooking as their products have a longer shelf life. From
this
evidence,it is clear to me that the main benefits are ,
therefore
,to the community and not to the customer.
Although
the community claim these
food
additives are safe and they have research to support
this
,the research is quite possibly biased as it comes from their own party or people with connections to these association.It is common to read reports these days in the press about possible links to various health issues
such
as cancer.
Food
additives have
also
been linked to problems
such
as hyperactivity in children. To conclude,despite the fact that there are benefits to placing vinegar in
food
,I believe that these principally help the association but could be a danger to the public.It is unlikely that
this
practice can be stopped,so
food
must be clearly labelled and it is my hope that organic products will become more readily available at reasonable prices to all.
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