Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Much debate has sparked whether spending four or more years at

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to get a

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really is better than simply getting a

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is commonly believed. In

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I will present both views and give my personal opinion.

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, working a

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is cheaper than studying at

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. With rising study costs, one almost always has to take out a student loan, unlike working a normal

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.

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to studying, where a student must be supported by society, a working person creates that value. The fact that too few people choose the latter path is the chief reason why study prices have risen so dramatically in the

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half century

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. Even after getting a

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, a large fraction of graduates

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to find a stable footing in the industry

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their

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is for. These young adults must

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struggle with mounting student loan rates. Rather than start studying with no future plan and solid financial backing, it is far more logical to apply for a

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, working provides

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experience

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that more and more college students lack. With fiercer and fiercer competition in the

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market, employers choose from the best candidates. Simply having a

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just isn’t enough and having practical

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is becoming more and more common. What that means is that attaining a

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no longer has

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a big advantage when compared to attaining no

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and working.

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, working immediately after finishing school does not mean a person will never get a

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. They can always do it later

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after they have gathered the necessary

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and have become financially independent. Enrolling and graduating from a college or

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is easier as well.

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, working after graduating high school can set you on a path in life, which you can enhance later on, once enough

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and savings have been accumulated.

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, studying at a

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or college empowers one to achieve higher academic heights. Professor lectures, vast libraries and other academic resources transform a fresh high school graduate into a learned scholar. Some studies have shown that the human brain stops forming at around age 25.

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is important because every piece of information is internalized far better until

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. That means that while studying at a later date is possible, it does not have the same impact. To conclude, working at a

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does not put

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on the economic system, while studying does somewhat. Attaining a bachelor’s or master’s

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certainly increases