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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #university #college #route #career #job #school
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 what should people do after
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 individuals. I tend to believe that it is important to apply
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 university straight after
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 you need and only later on start working. Other people believe differently. In
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 both views and explain my opinion. It is believed that starting studying at university or college after
school
 is the best way to have a prosperous career. It is that because people don’t waste their time working and immediately start to get educated in
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 that they are interested in. That leads to human beings getting enlightened and being able to work in a place which most of the time ensures
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have a successful life and profession waiting for them. Another example can be made that it provides students to be more responsible and independent.
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 argument can be made that it gets individuals
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 challenges and hard situations which develops problem-solving skills.
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, some others may claim that it is better to get a job straight after
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 taking a gap year and getting a job is to understand yourself considering helping realize what humankind wants to do in their life later on. Having a job provides the opportunity to have a steady income that helps to not worry that much about paying for the studies.
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knowing how to be thrifty and economical. Considering both views, I would assert that wanting to have a flourishing career others must
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finish studies at university or
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collage
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 after
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 to build interpersonal skills and have more opportunities facing them in life.
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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Academic qualifications
  • Specialized skills
  • In-depth knowledge
  • Personal growth
  • Social development
  • Practical experience
  • Financial independence
  • Career progression
  • Professional networking
  • Education
  • Work experience
  • Successful career
  • Personal interests
  • Career goals
  • Decision-making process
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