Some people consider price as most important thing to think about when buying product ( such as cell phone) or service (e.g. medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree?

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everything is
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needs. I strongly believe pricing is
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for buying any
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of goods. ys everything is
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needs. I strongly believe pricing is
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for buying any
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of goods.
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product
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always
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developed by
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shop
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is hiking for their development cost.
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of cell phone can
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your basic needs, I phone is more and more
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and
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lots of
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as
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like battery life cycle, smooth camera facilities, longevity and portability.
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of facility
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present in the cheap mobile phone. Medical treatment
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costly
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by
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. We know it’s our basic
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and
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to maintain the cost but medical equipment and medicine is very costly
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medical hospital always tries their best for finding the accurate reason for the diseases. For
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medical equipment and medicine. So those
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always try to
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developed
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equipment for doing their job they grab
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engineers and staff for making
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provide
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salary for the best people and
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if they aren’t mental satisfaction, they cannot develop
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quality
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product
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. So good
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invest huge amount of money for their employee better
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and better living
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cause
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increasing
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. Few people believe
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of
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price but I strongly believe without proper costing , not anyone
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better
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • budget
  • prioritize
  • manage finances
  • high quality
  • affordable
  • effective
  • durable
  • essential services
  • efficacy
  • compromise one's health
  • long-term savings
  • durability
  • efficiency
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