You are looking for a part-time job at a football club. Write a letter to the manager of the football club. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have tell him/her when you think you could start

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Artem Altukhov and I am looking for a job in the football area. Currently, I am a student and I am learning Business English at Montreal State University.

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why I would be able to do only part-time duties. I do not have any experience in the sports field, but it has been my dream to work for a football team since my childhood. I am a huge fan of your club and would be happy to be useful to the team. I can do any job you find suitable for me.

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, I worked as a waiter

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year, so I have some insight into an organizational hierarchy and how it works. If you agree to hire me, I would be ready to start even tomorrow. Please let me know about your decision or if you need more details. Yours faithfully, Artem Altukhov.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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152 words

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