Money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. Governments could better spend this money on other things to benefit the nation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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With all the troubles in the world today,
money
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spent on
space
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exploration
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is a complete waste. The
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could be better spent on other things. I
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exploration
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is
good
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informations
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space
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exploration
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and
people
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should
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in
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. Maybe in the
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future
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new planets and maybe with
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. I read in recently the newspaper
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maybe
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planet
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with
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and it is not so far away as we can’t maybe travel there in
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spaceship.
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because maybe there is life on
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planets.
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maybe on our
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in the
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there will be not good for living maybe because of global warming there will be too
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seas and
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oceans
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for drinking. If we find a new
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maybe humans will live on the new
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but will need
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for life.
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some
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who say that the
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could be better spent on other things. Maybe
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true there are many poor
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and poor countries in the world today.
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there is
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crise economy and there are many
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with no jobs
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exploration
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is very expensive and costs
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money
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cannot do
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exploration
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they need spend their
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on their country and help others. It is not
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thing for spending all the
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on
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. Some
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need to eat and homeless
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • complete waste
  • benefit the nation
  • technological advancements
  • foster
  • international cooperation
  • inspire
  • engage
  • boost the economy
  • long-term benefits
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