Nowadays, news companies spend a lot of money covering international news. However, local news is more relevant to people’s lives and should receive more funding.’ To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Journalism is

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art of showcasing the world with all the current affairs around the world and

examine

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the impact of that on people.

News

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companies tend to invest a large amount of money to cover international

news

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whereas

neglect

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local

news

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which resonates more with

local

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the local

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audience and I completely disagree with

this

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gesture. Developing countries like India, China and Bangladesh are still attracted to foreign nations and try to replicate their culture and way of living. And as we know everything comes with

price

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and

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human

curosity

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curiosity

has led to invest more money to cover international stories.

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, a person living in the rural part of India has more

curosity

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curiosity

to know about the results of the American presidential elections and

tend

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to keep

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a close

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eye on the whereabouts of that country. The craze for foreign

nations

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nations'

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seed has been planted by these

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media

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in the population of these growing nations so that they can act and walk like them. There are many local

news

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channels which do

there

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job faithfully and try to showcase the real

news

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which can make difference in local citizens but they are supported well financially as the viewers are less. Advertisement

organisation

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organisations

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don't approach these

media

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houses as they have minimal audience attention and that impacts the growth.

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, these local

media

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are not backed by the local government which not only impacts the employment ratio of the country but

also

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deviate

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citizens from actual problems which can affect their lives.

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, it is important for governments to be active in dealing with

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this

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these

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situations.

Central

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government should provide subsidies to local

news

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anchors and broadcasters, hire social

media

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influencers to improve viewership of

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this

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channels and allocate more

fund

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funds

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so that they can display the real picture of what we are than what we want to. To conclude, it is important for governments to take wise measures and educate people to watch more which really matters.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

328 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

community impact
timely information
public safety
local elections
resources
investigative journalism
uncover
corruption
environmental concerns
sense of community
cohesive society
national policies
global awareness
digital media
adapt
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