The percentage of obese children in Vietnam has been increasing in recent years. What are the causes and effects of this disturbing trend?

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cooking has been replaced with

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nowadays. 35% of young adults are facing the major issue of obesity in Vietnam and there are various reasons for that. In

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essay, I will discuss how we can overcome

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worldwide problem and give some recommendations. The

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and foremost reason for

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children

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to get obese is consuming fatty

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. Parents are busy

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their work

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day and they don't give attention

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their child's dietary

requirement

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and feed them with whatever is readily

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available

avaialble

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available

.

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, instant noodles are considered to be young

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favorite

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food

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because they are eating that

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every other day.

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,

kids

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tend to eat more chocolates and it has different types of additives which

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contributes

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. There are various ways in which

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problem can be tackled;

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parents should take their

kids

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where they can see other children and play with them. Physical activities will not only make

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healthier

healtier

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healthier

but

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improve their digestion.

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, pupils should cook

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at home using different vegetables and meats to maintain vitamin and

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levels in their

child

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.

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, they should replace sugary

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items with natural sugar.

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, jaggery candies can be used as a sugar replacement for

kids

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, instant noodles should be replaced with

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and fried

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with

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. To conclude, obesity is

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end result of

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of bad dietary habits and

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chain can be broken

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stages of human beings.