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You have an appointment with your manager the next day. Write him/her a letter about what you’re going to discuss at the meeting. In your meeting, you should tell: What did you do for the company during the years you worked there What changes you would like to recommend What training you require

#appointment #manager #you’re #company #years #changes
Dear Trina, I hope you are doing good. I'm writing
this
 letter in connection with the appointment I have with you tomorrow.
First
 of all, it's been almost a decade since started working for our company and time went really fast. I would like to inform you about the list of services I have done for our firm. I have been training, hiring and helping our staff with their insurance and other Human resource-related problems.
Additionally
, I have been a deciding factor in various major decisions that our firm adopted recently.
On the other hand
, I would like to recommend a few changes that might be really good for our business. We need to keep track of our employees who are doing exceptionally well and provide them with monthly bonuses to improve their productivity.
Furthermore
, additional vacation time for our staff who don't smoke as
this
 will improve our company's image. At
last
, I would like to receive training on how to purchase and refund the PO from our partners as I would be able to help with our purchasing department when their manager is off during the vacation. Looking forward to hearing from you Yours faithfully, Akila
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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