You have an appointment with your manager the next day. Write him/her a letter about what you’re going to discuss at the meeting. In your meeting, you should tell: What did you do for the company during the years you worked there What changes you would like to recommend What training you require

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Dear Trina, I hope you are doing good. I'm writing

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letter in connection with the appointment I have with you tomorrow.

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of all, it's been almost a decade since started working for our company and time went really fast. I would like to inform you about the list of services I have done for our firm. I have been training, hiring and helping our staff with their insurance and other Human resource-related problems.

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, I have been a deciding factor in various major decisions that our firm adopted recently.

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, I would like to recommend a few changes that might be really good for our business. We need to keep track of our employees who are doing exceptionally well and provide them with monthly bonuses to improve their productivity.

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, additional vacation time for our staff who don't smoke as

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will improve our company's image. At

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, I would like to receive training on how to purchase and refund the PO from our partners as I would be able to help with our purchasing department when their manager is off during the vacation. Looking forward to hearing from you Yours faithfully, Akila

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

198 words

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You have an appointment with your manager the next day. Write him/her a letter about what you’re going to discuss at the meeting. In your meeting, you should tell: What did you do for the company during the years you worked there What changes you would like to recommend What training you require

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Transport preference among young people in different countries.

For school children, their teachers have more influence on their intelligence and social development than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadventages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?

In their advertising businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negeztive development?

Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best way to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.