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As computers translate quicky and accurately, learning foreign languages is a waste of time? To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Recent decades have witnessed an ever-growing number of individuals utilising online translation resources to communicate with people who speak other
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While
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 some individuals reckon learning other
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 is wasting
time
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, others argue that it is meaningful to learn foreign dialects. In my opinion, I completely agree with the front argument, and in
this
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 essay, I will examine the reasons. First and foremost, people could use the
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for learning
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 several
languages
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 to develop other interests,
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 as sports, music and art. Undoubtedly,
time
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 is scarce, and we ought to allocate our
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 to different aspects wisely. Notwithstanding the fact that computer translation is not accurate all the
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, it is understandable by those language speakers. Often enough, mutual understanding is the fundamental element of any conversation.
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, if children are not required to learn other
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 at school, they would spend more
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in
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doing exercises or composing songs. In essence, it is beneficial for fostering
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 development
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 children.
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, it is impossible for humans to master more than 5
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 meanwhile. Indeed, ample research has demonstrated that individuals who speak multiple dialects do not imply better communication.
On the contrary
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, these people would encounter barriers in selecting appropriate vocabulary when they start a conversation with others.
As a result
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, it is widely acknowledged that children should not be introduced to more than 3
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,
otherwise
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 their speech development would be put in jeopardy. To summarise, computer translation plays a pivotal part in our daily lives since the technology saved a great deal of
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 for
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human beings
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 to manage several
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, including those not well recognised. Resultantly, I agree that humans could make better use of their
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 if learning foreign
languages
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 is not necessary.

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coherence cohesion
Your introduction and conclusion are present, but they could be strengthened by providing a clearer thesis statement and summarizing your main points more explicitly.
task achievement
Your essay responds to the task prompt by discussing the advantages of not learning foreign languages due to the availability of computer translation. However, try to address potential counterarguments or explore the benefits of language learning in more depth.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • automated translation
  • cultural competence
  • nuances
  • cognitive development
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • globalization
  • cultural immersion
  • language barrier
  • cross-cultural communication
  • language acquisition
  • idiomatic expressions
  • dialects
  • pronunciation
  • syntax
  • semantics
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