In the past, Most people used to travel to their place of work. With increase use of computers, the internet and smartphones, more and more people are starting to work from home. What is advantages and disadvantages of this development?

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as it make their lives easier
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particularly,
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will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of working from
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easier.
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working from
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may do their job more precise and accurate
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those who are working from their office. The reason behind
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is that
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the former gets more rest before
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in the morning as they don’t have to travel to their offices. Another advantage is that
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the
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who are working from
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spend less money
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their transportation which will improve their socioeconomic status.
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drive their cars frequently and for long
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so they will spend less money on fuel and
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maintenance
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of jobs that require
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the attendance
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of the
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must see and examine their patients physically get accurate diagnoses and provide the correct treatments. While working from
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comfort to the
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more lazy
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easily if they are working from
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might be very comforting for the
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but
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employers need to keep
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who can
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from
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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