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Some people say that teenagers should work part-time and earn money. This way they will learn basic lessons about work and become more disciplined. Others argue that teenagers shouldn't sacrifice their rest and after-school activities to work. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #teenagers #work #money #lessons #shouldn #sacrifice #rest #activities
Over recent years,
students
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 labour somehow became a trend. Technology development pace
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these days
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 leads to teenagers access to many inputs
such
 as knowledge about different skills. According to
this
, many of them are willing to start learning something that can earn money from it. Some of them are trying to make their little online business. Another group of them participate in workshops or study online resources to achieve
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 skill
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This
 is a satisfying reason for parents who are agreed with their
children
 working. Because they feel good about hard and soft skills that their child learns during part-time work.
On the other hand
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children's
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 rights activists always emphasize the importance of
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 free time. They believe that kids and teenagers should use their after-school time to play, learn and have fun and each activity that causes to make money from them
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 is a kind of child abuse.
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peace of
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peace of
 childhood According to my own
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 standard to decide about every issue.I have the same
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thinking, we should respect our
children
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 adolescence and remember that these ages are
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period
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 of their life to learn, grow and be happy and free.
I'm not actually agree
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 with having a job at these ages, and in my
opinion
, we can make our
children
 disciplined, responsible and more strong with some hobbies, games or learning lessons that are not against
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their freedom and happiness; No need to encourage them to work.
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