You have bought a new home recently and you want to hire an interior decorator. Write a letter to the interior decorator seeking information about his services. In your letter • let him know how you came to know about his work/name • specify about your condominium {flat) • discuss your furnishing taste

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Dear Mr Andrew, The objective of writing

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letter is to acquire knowledge about interior decoration. A couple of weeks ago, I bought a condominium and it needs to decorate the interior part.

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, I am seeking information about your services.

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week, I went to my friend's apartment because she has organized a dinner for her close ones.

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, we met at her address. After finishing dinner, she gave us a home tour. I was amazed by the decoration and asked about the person who did the incredible work and she recommended you. I moved to a new house which has three bedrooms, one kitchen, and a huge living area. Since the sitting area is very spacious, I want to decorate it with simple and sober colours.

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, for the kitchen, I want to install hanging lights,

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I need your suggestion for that which colour goes with them. I hope you will visit

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weekend so that I can show you the house.

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I pick up the colours for the walls, I would really appreciate your assistance. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Harwinder

HarinderSat Oct 01 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

191 words

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