Some people claim that it is acceptable to use animals in medical research for the benefit of human beings, while others argue that it is wrong. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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There are debates about whether we should do experiments on

animals

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. The topic itself includes

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the

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subject of animal

rights

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and scientific developments. To make a conclusion

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will discuss both opinions in my essay. On the one hand, animal observation is one of the main

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of creating a

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successful

succesfull

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successful

scientific discovery. Results of the research and

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approaches

aproaches

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approaches

may benefit

people

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all around the world. During the

last

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few decades, humans have been able to overcome many diseases and save lives.

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, the covid 19 pandemic was a challenge for humanity, and a lot of

people

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lost their loved ones and suffered not only physically but

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mentally,

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creating a vaccine prevented deaths and complications in many

people

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. We would not be able to achieve

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significant result without testing on

animals

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researched

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and scientific achievements

imporves

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improves

are necessary for future developments.

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, humans are not the only ones who live on earth

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animals

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also

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have their

rights

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People

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are already invaded

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animal territories, polluted their living conditions and stole their food resources. Nowadays in order to balance

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ecosystem, we have to carefully consider animal

rights

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. According to the national newspaper of Mongolia, there were

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millions of rabbits and mouses were slaughtered in order to reach

a scientific results

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a scientific result

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believe thanks to technology we can reduce

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number and protect animal

rights

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as much as we could. To conclude, humans are not

only

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species

scecies

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species

who

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that

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live on earth so we must care about

animals

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equally.

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, in my

opinion

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we can not fully stop animal experiments,

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we should always search for

a alternatives

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alternatives

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and use technology calculations and simulations in order to achieve

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apply

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greater results.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

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289 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

ethical considerations
moral dilemma
animal rights
alternative methods
computer modeling
in-vitro testing
medical breakthroughs
vaccines
treatments
stringent regulations
minimization of suffering
humane treatment
scientific validity
biological similarity
applicable results

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