Some people claim that it is acceptable to use animals in medical research for the benefit of human beings, while others argue that it is wrong. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are debates about whether we should do experiments on

animals

. The topic itself includes

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subject of animal

rights

and scientific developments. To make a conclusion

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will discuss both opinions in my essay. On the one hand, animal observation is one of the main

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of creating a

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successful

succesfull

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successful

scientific discovery. Results of the research and

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approaches

aproaches

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approaches

may benefit

people

all around the world. During the

last

few decades, humans have been able to overcome many diseases and save lives.

For example

, the covid 19 pandemic was a challenge for humanity, and a lot of

people

lost their loved ones and suffered not only physically but

also

mentally,

hence

creating a vaccine prevented deaths and complications in many

people

. We would not be able to achieve

this

significant result without testing on

animals

.

Furthermore

,

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and scientific achievements

imporves

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improves

are necessary for future developments.

On the other hand

, humans are not the only ones who live on earth

therefore

,

animals

also

have their

rights

.

People

are already invaded

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animal territories, polluted their living conditions and stole their food resources. Nowadays in order to balance

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ecosystem, we have to carefully consider animal

rights

. According to the national newspaper of Mongolia, there were

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millions of rabbits and mouses were slaughtered in order to reach

a scientific results

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a scientific result

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.

However

,

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believe thanks to technology we can reduce

this

number and protect animal

rights

as much as we could. To conclude, humans are not

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species

scecies

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species

who

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live on earth so we must care about

animals

equally.

However

, in my

opinion

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we can not fully stop animal experiments,

hence

we should always search for

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and use technology calculations and simulations in order to achieve

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greater results.