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You are going on a short training course at a college in Greenmount, Northern Ireland. You need somewhere to live while you are there. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter: •explain your situation •describe the accommodation you require •say when you will need it

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Dear, Sir I am here to
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 my situation. I am going to take a short-term training program at a college in Greenmount, Northern Ireland. But, I do not have an appropriate residence there. I need
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 and private space for me especially near the educational institute in order to reduce time loss for transportation. If possible, I would prefer residence inside of than outside. Most of all, I am looking for a one-bed and one-bath apartment for my privacy. I would
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 tell you that I need my residence about one month later from now on. I wonder whether you would accommodate
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me, or Could you recommend any house near
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 which is appropriate for my condition. I am looking forward to your reply. Thank you for reading. Yours faithfully, Magellan.
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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