You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and - ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. - --- Ask what the prices are and - how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Shikha, and I am living in your nearby society named Acme heights 2, Mohali. I heard about your shop from one of my friends. I want to buy a washing machine from your shop. I have a few queries related to that if you could please answer those, it would be great. I want to purchase a fully automatic washing machine for my home. It should be front load and the weight capacity has to be 10kg. The colour I would prefer is white. So, I need to know the price according to the requirements I have listed above.

Moreover

, Please let me know if it is already available in your store or not. If it is available can you please hold off for

this

week, I'll visit your showroom

this

coming Saturday. If it is not available in your showroom,

then

is it possible for you to get that for me? I can pay the booking amount if you would like. I need to purchase that as earliest as possible. Looking forward to your reply. Yours Sincerely, Shikha

Submitted by shikha_dhingra on Sat Oct 01 2022

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