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Nowadays, many people have access to computers and a large number of children enjoy playing video games. What are the advantages and disadvantages of playing video games for children?

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Nowadays, many people around the world play
video
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games
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. It doesn’t matter how old you are or which country you live in, you can enjoy
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games
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 of reasons. In
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 writing, we’re going to look into some of the advantages and disadvantages of playing
video
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games
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 for different age groups
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children
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. In our digital world which is improving day by day, many people have access to the internet. They may have different types of connections, but all of them can enjoy playing online
games
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. Playing
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 is more common
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children
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. Companies are providing game consoles and
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everyday
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 and every year which makes it easier and more possible for all
children
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 to buy them and play with them.
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, it has many pros and cons. One of the pros of playing
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games
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 for
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 is that it increases their creativity. They have no limitations in imagining while playing
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games
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 and it makes it possible for them to think beyond rules and do whatever they want. It is completely normal for
children
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 to suffer from daily life stress so it can
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 reduce their stress level easily because they’d feel relaxed by playing.
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, it has many disadvantages.
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, playing requires looking at a bright screen for hours.
Children
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 are growing and it is essential for them to take care of their minds and bodies, but constant looking into these screens can damage a child’s eyesight easily. It
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 makes them less social and more introverted which can harm their social lives in the future. In conclusion, playing has both positive and negative effects on
children
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, but it’s their parents’ duty to make it possible for them to play yet prevent them from playing more than usual.
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