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The best way to understand other cultures is to work for a multinational organization. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#cultures #work #organization
Some
people
 claim that working in a multinational
organization
 is the best
way
 to develop
understanding
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 of other
cultures
. I disagree with
this
 view because there are other ways which are more effective yet effortless. On the one hand, I admit that working in a multinational
organization
 allows you to meet and communicate with
people
 from other countries.
For example
, in global companies
such
 as Amazon, staff need to work with those who come from different areas to get a better understanding of
the
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certain local
culture
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cultures
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. So that they can choose an area-oriented market strategy to promote product sailing.
Also
, employees who work in global organizations may have more opportunities to travel abroad, which means they can get familiar with different
cultures
 by attending local festival activities and experiencing local scenery.
However
, working for a multinational
organization
 is challenging for those who are unable to speak other foreign languages to some extent. I believe that there are other methods to help
people
 understand other
cultures
.
Firstly
, many platforms and apps nowadays provide services for
people
 to find and chat with
people
 who come from other countries. Since the price of a mobile phone is cheap,
this
way
 seemed to be a much easier
way
 to learn about
cultures
 from
people
 compared to working in a global
organization
.
Secondly
, information is easy to get from the Internet. Scrolling through the website or watching documentaries or movies of certain nations is more effective and comprehensive because they contain more knowledge relating to local history and customs that cannot
learn
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 from communication. In conclusion,
while
 I admit that working in a multinational
organization
 may have
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advantages
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to help
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people
 understand other
cultures
, it is not the best
way
.
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