In some areas of the US, a 'carfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?
In certain regions of the United States, the movements of adolescents are restricted at certain periods of midnight except
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are under the guidance of older people.In my opinion,I believe that Rephrase
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decision will be discussed in detail.
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To begin
with,decreased risk of alcohol intoxication is one of the major good effects of Linking Words
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is because youngsters are known to attend clubs at night where they consume a lot of alcohol.But with the guidance of a mature individual,Linking Words
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act would not be committed.Linking Words
Consequently
,it reduces the rate of intoxication.Linking Words
For example
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attended nightclubs. Correct pronoun usage
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In addition
, a reduced rate of road accident occurrence is a benefit of Linking Words
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is because since the youths drive very rough at late hours when they are alone, the thought that they are being monitored in the presence of an elderly person makes them drive well.Linking Words
For instance
,the news report in the Linking Words
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five days shows that the percentage of motor-vehicle collisions reduced markedly following the imposition of a curfew on adolescents.
In my opinion,I believe that Linking Words
this
restriction of movement is beneficial because it reduces crime in society.Linking Words
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is because juveniles carry out a lot of illegal activity at midnight Linking Words
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their hormonal drive.To illustrate,the high percentage of testosterone hormone in youngsters pushes them to commit atrocities but when guided by older people,Linking Words
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such
acts would be curtailed.Linking Words
Hence
, I believe that Linking Words
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trend should be adopted for a long period.
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To conclude
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although
restriction of movement on the youths at a certain period of the night results in decreased self-dependence,I still believe that it is a beneficial one because it Linking Words
led
to reduced crime, Wrong verb form
leads
hangovers
from drinks and accidents.Correct word choice
and hangovers
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