In some areas of the US, a 'carfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

In certain regions of the United States, the movements of adolescents are restricted at certain periods of midnight except

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when they

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are under the guidance of older people.In my opinion,I believe that

this

trend is a good development and the reasons for

this

decision will be discussed in detail.

To begin

with,decreased risk of alcohol intoxication is one of the major good effects of

this

trend.

This

is because youngsters are known to attend clubs at night where they consume a lot of alcohol.But with the guidance of a mature individual,

this

act would not be committed.

Consequently

,it reduces the rate of intoxication.

For example

,a study in Zambia showed that about 85% of kids

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presented to the hospital on

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account of intoxication from harsh drinks

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those

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attended nightclubs.

In addition

, a reduced rate of road accident occurrence is a benefit of

this

development.

This

is because since the youths drive very rough at late hours when they are alone, the thought that they are being monitored in the presence of an elderly person makes them drive well.

For instance

,the news report in the

last

five days shows that the percentage of motor-vehicle collisions reduced markedly following the imposition of a curfew on adolescents. In my opinion,I believe that

this

restriction of movement is beneficial because it reduces crime in society.

This

is because juveniles carry out a lot of illegal activity at midnight

due to

their hormonal drive.To illustrate,the high percentage of testosterone hormone in youngsters pushes them to commit atrocities but when guided by older people,

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desire to do

such

acts would be curtailed.

Hence

, I believe that

this

trend should be adopted for a long period.

To conclude

,

although

restriction of movement on the youths at a certain period of the night results in decreased self-dependence,I still believe that it is a beneficial one because it

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to reduced crime,

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and hangovers

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from drinks and accidents.