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Some people think that students who achieve the best acted academic results should be rewarded others believe it is more important to reward student who show improvement Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #students #results #reward #student #show #improvement
People’s opinion differs as to whether Reward should be given to top
students
, or to those who
show
 upgradation. I support the former viewpoint on
this
 matter. Those who argue that academies should recognize
students
 who get better grades than previous ones have their reasons.
Firstly
, Children will get motivated.
Students
 of each level want to get prizes and recognition based on improvement encourages them to work hard and
show
 better
marks
. So, that they will be recognized by their institution.
Secondly
, it will help in recognizing efforts
not
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 grades. As
,
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 all fingers are not equal and getting prizes based on academic results is the right way.
Students
 with low academic skills doing a lot of effort to
show
 improvement will get nothing while toppers with less effort get rewards.
However
, I side with those who feel that
students
 with top
marks
 get rewards. One reason is that it will lead to healthy competition. If prizes are not given to the top positioner,
then
 no one will want to compete for the top position which will lead to the end of
spirit
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 to work hard for
first
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 position.
Second
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 reason is that if the prize is distributed according to upgradation,
then
 it is unfair
for
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 those who acted best in academic results and demotivate them.
For example
, a
student
 with 95
marks
 gets nothing and on the other
side
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 a
student
 with 60
marks
 gets a prize which is unfair
for
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to
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 the
first
 one. In conclusion, while there are reasons to believe that
student
show
Correct pronoun usage
who show
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 improvement get awards, my own view is that
student
 with top results gets awards because it will lead to active rivalry and
also
 unfair to top rankers.
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