During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. Your talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter: • Remind him when and where you met • Tell him what kind of job you are interested in • Say why you think you would be suitable for the job

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Dear Javid, I am writing to let you know that I am Malik who sat

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to you on a plane.Nowadays,I am looking for a new job opportunity.You suggested I can work in one of your restaurants. I would like to inform you that we travelled together on the same aeroplane from New York to London at the end of December when Christmas day was looming.You

also

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told me that I have to attend the opening ceremony of my new restaurant. I would like to work as a chef in your restaurant because since my childhood I had a burning passion for cooking anything.I am interested in working in the kitchen. I have relevant experience in

this

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field,so I can cook different kinds of meals

such

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as pizza,barbecue and so on.

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,I am good at baking cake because my father was a baker and he taught me everything.

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this

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,I have a certificate which is internationally recognised. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully Malik Maliki

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

169 words

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chain of restaurants
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managerial role
customer service
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