During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. Your talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter: • Remind him when and where you met • Tell him what kind of job you are interested in • Say why you think you would be suitable for the job

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Dear Javid, I am writing to let you know that I am Malik who sat

to you on a plane.Nowadays,I am looking for a new job opportunity.You suggested I can work in one of your restaurants. I would like to inform you that we travelled together on the same aeroplane from New York to London at the end of December when Christmas day was looming.You

also

told me that I have to attend the opening ceremony of my new restaurant. I would like to work as a chef in your restaurant because since my childhood I had a burning passion for cooking anything.I am interested in working in the kitchen. I have relevant experience in

this

field,so I can cook different kinds of meals

such

as pizza,barbecue and so on.

Additionally

,I am good at baking cake because my father was a baker and he taught me everything.

Further

this

,I have a certificate which is internationally recognised. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully Malik Maliki

Submitted by malikli.malik1995 on Sat Oct 01 2022

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