Air travel causes environmental pollution, so many people believe that there should be an increase in the price of air tickets in order to reduce air traffic. Do you agree or disagree?

With the advances in technology, various means of transportation have been developed and become increasingly accessible, including air travel.

However

, environmental pollution ensues as the emission of fumes increases, so some

people

request to increase the

price

of air

tickets

to alleviate the pollution problem. In my opinion,

this

is a sensible solution. Many reasons can support my stance.

First

, an increase in the

price

of air

tickets

deters those who are not wealthy enough to pay.

People

with

lower

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budget

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will be forced to choose domestic travels or destinations that require less money.

Furthermore

, the intention of

people

travelling is not always pure. More often than not,

people

visit or travel to other countries because they have seen other

people

travelling to those places too, whether via social media or personal conversations.

Hence

, the increase in the

price

of flight

tickets

causes those who intend to merely show off to reconsider

this

. As a proportion of

people

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not to travel

through

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planes, the environmental pollution will naturally

mitigate

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. Opponents would argue that the

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increasing

price

of flight

tickets

would only benefit the airline companies and nothing can be changed.

To begin

with, many flights are mandatory in businesses, so the number of flights would not decrease even if the

price

is raised, resulting in merely higher profits for airline companies.

However

, since the number of flights cannot be reduced whatsoever, we should not take it into consideration.

Instead

, focusing on decreasing the demand

of

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tourists should be more effective in reducing the usage of

airplanes

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aeroplanes

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. In conclusion, raising the

price

of flying

tickets

is an efficacious method to reduce the usage of planes, leading to the improvement of our environment.

Therefore

, before more sustainable energy was found, governments should keep

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plane

tickets

expensive.