ome people think that the main factors influencing a child’s development these days are things such as television, friends, and music. Others believe that the family still remains more important. Discuss both opinions and give your opinion
There is a topic to be discussed by many
people
that is
what mainly influence
a Correct subject-verb agreement
influences
child
's growth, social media
and friends
, or family. I think the former are
more important factors because they are full of Change the verb form
is
people
's life and both influence
a child
and whose
family.
Social Correct pronoun usage
his
media
is full of people
's living environment. It is everywhere in people
's daily life and people
cannot get away from it. Everyone can come across Correct your spelling
advertisements
advertisments
through television, Correct your spelling
advertisements
redio
or mobile phone, which could stimulate Correct your spelling
radio
people
's desire of
consumption and even deliver a new consuming view to a Change preposition
for
child
. Correct your spelling
Similarly
Similarily
, a Correct your spelling
Similarly
child
's friends
can also
affect a child
's view such
as what is the popular music now, who is the internet celebrity, and what types of dress or making up way is more fasion
etc. Those factors Correct your spelling
fashion
influence
a child
everyday
and he/she would follow Replace the word
every day
it
automatically.
Correct pronoun usage
them
However
, some individuals might argue that the family is still the most important factor of influence
a kid. This
is because the child
is starting to imitate parents
when him/her was born. A lot of behaviour of a person would be like his/her parents
. I agree with that. Nevertheless
, as I mentioned earlier, the environment can influence
everyone, which means not only a child
but also
adults including children's parents
. Many parents
' views and behaviour could also
be changed by social media
and their friends
, and further
influence
their children's development.
To conclude, I believe that although
the family is an important factor to influence
the development of a child
, it does not mean that it is more important than social media
and friends
, because the latter could both influence
a child
and adults of a family and promote their change.Submitted by 2587729786 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
