ome people think that the main factors influencing a child’s development these days are things such as television, friends, and music. Others believe that the family still remains more important. Discuss both opinions and give your opinion

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There is a topic to be discussed by many
people
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that is
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what mainly
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influence
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influences
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a
child
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's growth, social
media
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and
friends
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, or family. I think the former
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more important factors because they are full of
people
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's life and both
influence
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a
child
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and
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family. Social
media
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is full of
people
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's living environment. It is everywhere in
people
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's daily life and
people
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cannot get away from it. Everyone can come across
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advertisements
advertisments
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advertisements
through television,
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radio
or mobile phone, which could stimulate
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's desire
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consumption and even deliver a new consuming view to a
child
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.
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Similarily
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, a
child
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's
friends
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can
also
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affect a
child
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's view
such
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as what is the popular music now, who is the internet celebrity, and what types of dress or making up way is more
fasion
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fashion
etc. Those factors
influence
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a
child
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everyday
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and he/she would follow
it
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them
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automatically.
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, some individuals might argue that the family is still the most important factor of
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a kid.
This
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is because the
child
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is starting to imitate
parents
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when him/her was born. A lot of behaviour of a person would be like his/her
parents
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. I agree with that.
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, as I mentioned earlier, the environment can
influence
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everyone, which means not only a
child
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but
also
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adults including children's
parents
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. Many
parents
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' views and behaviour could
also
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be changed by social
media
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and their
friends
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, and
further
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influence
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their children's development. To conclude, I believe that
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the family is an important factor to
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the development of a
child
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, it does not mean that it is more important than social
media
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and
friends
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, because the latter could both
influence
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a
child
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and adults of a family and promote their change.
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